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Saturn Eating His Children

by Bruce W Niedt

(after Goya)

Crazed, the whites of his eyes

are wild as crescent moons,

his beard and hair, ravaged forests.

 

His maw, an open shriek, devours

the flesh of his flesh,

clutching a naked body

 

in a vise-grip.

His terrible teeth rip

the already headless, bloody torso.

 

He does this to keep his children

from fulfilling a prophecy

and usurping the throne.

 

Back on Earth, the mortals turn

gymnasiums to abbattoirs,

busses to infernos.

 

Retribution becomes

the snake that eats itself,

and they all spiral down

 

into a mouth of madness,

torn apart by hatredÂ’s teeth,

taking the children with them.

09/09/2004

Author's Note: For the victims of Beslan....

Posted on 09/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 09/25/04 at 07:02 PM

Your mythological reference is biting to say the least, Bruce. Ouroboros raising its ugly head to accentuating validity in a self-defeating cause. Great wake up call, reinforced with the impact of the last stanza. Pe4ce...

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