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Heartspeak

by Kate Demeree

If we never meet again,

Should the sands of time run out,

You will not forget me,

You will see my eyes

Peering into your soul,

When you close your eyes,

When the darkness calls,

Before the light,

And you will hear me say...

I Love You...

09/02/2004

Posted on 09/02/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 09/02/04 at 08:18 PM

haunting and poignant with the heart of our Kate

Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/03/04 at 04:11 AM

Very smooth and exceptional piece. I loved this.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/03/04 at 04:25 AM

Exquisite. There is always lonliness and always the need to know that we aren't truly alone. Great read.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/03/04 at 05:09 AM

It felt like a spell at first! Great read!

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/03/04 at 05:05 PM

Maybe the simplest, most searing poetic thing of beauty you have ever written..so perfect in its emotional completeness

Posted by JD Clay on 09/04/04 at 10:30 PM

This is truly a journey into the title work of an angelic spirit. Great love poem, Kate...pe4ce

Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/05/04 at 07:48 PM

this is beautiful kate! love it

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