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Freedom

by Deanna M Gritsonis

To be freed
I left smiling
Finally leaving
After looking so many times
Searching for you
While you looked for me
For those answers we never got
And now after we sealed it
It’s done

It shown in our eyes
The glow back in the both of us
It clear this was the last time
For you can’t go back

And forwards it wasn’t you and I we saw
To say it… it wasn’t.

2 am and I can’t sleep because I am so light
I think I might fly to work tomorrow
It was a great adventure
You and I
But it finally came to an end

That adventure of you and I
So go get your girl
And I’ll go get my man
Because it wasn’t meant for you and I
To be nothing than great friends.

09/01/2004

Author's Note: To Zeppelin: To great times and bad. It came out great in the end. So heres to the end. Cheers! ~ with smiling eyes always....Firefly.

Posted on 09/01/2004
Copyright © 2024 Deanna M Gritsonis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/01/04 at 04:26 PM

The approach sounds positive and intellectual center seems intact.

Posted by Richard Vince on 09/02/04 at 10:24 PM

yes. a feeling i remember well, captured perfectly, and worded beautifully.

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