{ pathetic.org }
 

MOMENT 11

by Graeme Fielden

The WORLD just got bigger

when I closed my eyes...

09/01/2004

Posted on 08/31/2004
Copyright © 2024 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/01/04 at 01:29 AM

Intriguing! The visual and the verbal stir the imagination!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/01/04 at 04:13 PM

Yes, you did transcend all the visible boundaries. The visual is suggestive.

Posted by JD Clay on 09/02/04 at 01:01 PM

They say the best way to connect to the source is by tapping into your ever present, ever expanding, inner being. This piece speaks volumes, Graeme. Pe4ce...

Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/02/04 at 01:20 PM

Very intrigueing... sometimes it does that doesn't it? Like the visual it adds to the effect.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/04/04 at 06:40 PM

Interesting that our perception of size is determined upon our ability to see instead of feel and listen. A lot to think about in this one.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/04/04 at 07:04 PM

Lovin'it!

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)