| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/30/04 at 12:20 PM How fun, full of twists and a wonderful ending. Not for the frog of course! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/30/04 at 05:36 PM *laughing and applauding* Wonderful! |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 08/30/04 at 11:05 PM hehehehehe....i liked this....they gotta put this in the Brothers Grimm fairytales or something |
| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 08/31/04 at 12:04 AM It stinks of Roald Dahl, I love it! This stanza: “This must be the frog” she thought
“from the stories I’ve been told
If I catch and kiss him then
what wonder shall I behold?” May work better as: "This must be the frog," she though
"from stories I've been told
If I catch him and I kiss him then
shall wonder I behold?"
The rhythm is so strong in all the other chunks, that one kind of threw me off. Lovely work, and welcome to Pathetic. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 08/31/04 at 02:54 PM Moral: If you can't join 'em, eat 'em? Hahahaha Great story Mike, very entertaining. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/02/04 at 05:01 AM LOLOLOL...... it is not just funny.. it has it's own moral.. I like it! I like it ALOT! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/04/04 at 02:41 AM Good poem and great ending twist....Charlie |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/05/04 at 04:10 PM hahahaha...great story! wonderful humor! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/08/04 at 05:51 AM hahaha..lovely twist! Fantastic story! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/09/04 at 03:32 PM Great fun with the old fairy tale! Ending a very humorous surprise. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/12/04 at 03:24 AM Heh! This is so funny! Love the idea and the delivery! |
| Posted by Delilah Coyne on 03/27/06 at 10:55 PM It's entertaining and funny, but beyond that it flows so nicely. Well done! |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/18/07 at 11:53 AM What can I say that hasn't already been said? Truly hilarious and deviously delightful ending. |
