THE POEM HOW IT WAS WRITTEN and HOW IT WAS MEANT TO BE by Anne EngelenOriginally Written (left column):
for anne engelen: bow down before the one you serve by Gabriel Ricard
Meant (right column):
for anne engelen: I bow down before the one I serve
Now, now Anne. Know now Anne There's no reason theres a reason for a bitter attitude. for my bitter attitude.
Even though Although you were in high school I only just started when John The Baptist taking steps was in the middle of selling in lifes baby shoes himself from the throat up. your boots just kept on walking.
That doesn't make you, The years of experience how can I put this kindly, have been graceful super-duper-freaking old. to you.
It just happens to mean Theres so much you've enjoyed the world I have missed out on from it's earliest hour. so much I can learn from you.
Dinosaurs for example. I envy you.
Nothing wrong with that. Knowing you is wonderful. You're still a real sweet heart. Youre a real sweetheart.
Even though I get my kicks out of a variety of things they still haven't and witches pulled that house off your sister. just make my heart sing.
I love ya Anne. Youre a hell of a witch, Anne.
Even though I pray, oh God, I pray you haven't got a prayer that i dont have to give in when it comes to defeating me. to my defeat.
Trust me, And hope, no one will think you will leave me any less of you my dignity if you decided to give up now. So i can grow up to be like you 08/25/2004 Posted on 08/25/2004 Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by JD Clay on 08/25/04 at 02:03 PM They say there are two sides to every story, but I can't tell you how refreshing it is to see such a dichotomous circumstance come to fruition through poetry. Your uninhibited interpolation is exquisite, Anne. High marks all around!
Pe4ce... |
Posted by Rula Shin on 08/25/04 at 03:04 PM Brilliant!! Bravo!! Take that!! Encore!! This is all too good to end anytime soon (says this fan)...Anne you're a genius and I'm laughing my ass off hahahaha |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/25/04 at 09:02 PM Ok, I'll admit. I only jut started (with his - the original - poem) but I LOVE this!!! LMAO!!! |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/25/04 at 11:53 PM fascinating and entertaining, thanks both of you. |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 08/26/04 at 08:19 PM Gabe, I love you. But this is the way it DEFINITELY is done. Especially by a witch. Dun you know better than to mess with a witch? :) |
Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 08/27/04 at 11:42 PM very very clever...well done |
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 08/30/04 at 03:04 AM This poem is sweet!...perfectly done in ladylike fashion..MUAHS!!!
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Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/31/07 at 04:54 PM Hi Anne,
great write bothe of you, Anne and gabriel. This is very different. Don't know the story behind it, but ya both did good. Lots of Hugs. :) |
Posted by Mo Couts on 06/20/11 at 04:36 PM This is AWESOME and about I about giggled myself to death, lol! |
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