In Time, We'll Fail by Amanda L Marronthis world of mine
collapsing slowly
onto itself
my pillars of strength have weakened
in the passing storm
i fear the fall 08/15/2004 Posted on 08/15/2004 Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
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Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/19/04 at 01:00 AM So much is said in so few words! The fear, the sense of fatigue, and the storm of reality that helped produce them are expertly presented in verse. Great read. |
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