| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/08/04 at 11:52 AM Quite striking imagery! Reminds me of Genesis 1 and of Jesus' words, "The wind blows wherever it pleases. You hear its sound, but you cnnot tell where it comes from or cannot tell where it is going. ..." John 3:8 In the case of your poem it is a matter of Eternal quiet, "The echo of feather's landing". |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/08/04 at 05:49 PM Max, this is so peaceful and vivid. I will add it to my favorites list. And reading it today (Sunday) it means so much to me - for many reasons. Thank you for touching my heart. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 08/09/04 at 02:01 PM simply lovely... |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/01/05 at 04:08 PM you've caught me short of words...*nods head*... |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/23/05 at 01:16 AM the large and small of it... beauty and pain in one ear-splitting breath... you said it... blessings... |
| Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 07/16/05 at 06:19 AM I absolutely love this - the delicacy of the first stanza against the mammoth punch delivered by the second. Heady, succinct, and as always, extremely well-done. |
