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Young
by Dan Garcia-BlackBroken toys
Damaged goods
Sleepless nights
Playing Doctor
She ten
He forty
Never Safe
Always wary
She forty
He dead
Can't trust
Any love
Development
Arrested
Forever...
Young
08/05/2004 Posted on 08/05/2004
Copyright © 2024 Dan Garcia-Black
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/25/11 at 01:09 PM Congratulations on POTD today. We seem less and less able to protect our young today. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 09/25/11 at 04:33 PM ongrats on POTD!A dark, very haunting write. Well worth the read and attention. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/25/11 at 07:35 PM A terrible tale, told subtly and sparsely. Excellent work. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 09/26/11 at 12:59 AM Having lived this horror and felt this pain, while still dealing with it's aftermath, I have to say this is a deeply touching poem. and congrats on POTD! |
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