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cemetery of lost thoughts (revised)

by Rhyana Fisher

saccharine rhymes from seventh grade
bitter roots hidden beneath past pretenses
truth sheltered behind a straight face
nobody bothered exploring

imaginary words writ in skin
bruises yowling of cowardice
jagged across oppressive rule
thus were the cage bars wrought

trial by terrorized misery
echoing within the void neglect left
ignored in the all-encompassing necessity
of immediate obedience and order

the pages remained blank
truth in ink lost
strangled by the 'what if' of discovery
buried in 'should not'

08/02/2004

Author's Note: written after reading Poetry Read by None by Andi Mallory.

Posted on 08/03/2004
Copyright © 2024 Rhyana Fisher

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/03/04 at 04:57 AM

I like this poem so much! The consonance continues throughout the poem, and the last stanza is especially strong. Good work and a tribute to Andi. ;-)

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 08/04/04 at 03:44 AM

wow, vivid phrases you've used throughout...great read

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