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busy work
by Rhyana Fishernow the sky fell
on the first of the month
tho nobody noticed.
how could they
if they neither kept watch
nor paid attention to
grimy reality? 07/29/2004 Posted on 07/29/2004
Copyright © 2024 Rhyana Fisher
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 08/01/04 at 07:55 PM WOW! Stunning opening, trhough for me (I'm the picky one) I would want to trim out odd words to give it more power yet |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/03/04 at 05:06 PM Yes, these are our external realities capable of causing internal disturbances.But then, we are helpless. And in accepting this helplessness, we are no more helpless.hahahaha |
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