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Sleepless
by Patricia J ReedYou keep me awake
Your breathing and thundering
Dogs, please stop snoring 07/22/2004 Author's Note: this is my first haiku attempt
Posted on 07/23/2004
Copyright © 2025 Patricia J Reed
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/20/04 at 12:16 PM Snoring dogs! We have cats so I don't know about snoring dogs, but it sounds hilarious. Cute verse. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/22/05 at 02:40 PM Not bad. Though I would call it a minimal rather than a haiku. |
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