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Sleepless

by Patricia J Reed

You keep me awake
Your breathing and thundering
Dogs, please stop snoring

07/22/2004

Author's Note: this is my first haiku attempt

Posted on 07/23/2004
Copyright © 2024 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/20/04 at 12:16 PM

Snoring dogs! We have cats so I don't know about snoring dogs, but it sounds hilarious. Cute verse.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/22/05 at 02:40 PM

Not bad. Though I would call it a minimal rather than a haiku.

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