| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 07/21/04 at 03:52 PM Wow, now THAT is an image...BLANKNESS...it is complete in its blankness...what an impact! This comes across perfectly...well done. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 07/21/04 at 10:51 PM packs a punch ;D |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 07/21/04 at 11:39 PM Goodness, sounds silent but deadly Anne. |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 07/22/04 at 01:19 AM love what you did with just a dozen words. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/22/04 at 08:06 AM this leaves me in suspense with all its drama and pending change. Very well done. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/22/04 at 03:47 PM You do pack so much into such tiny spaces. And what Rula said, too. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/22/04 at 07:12 PM Incredible. I don't know if you are talking about a death or of love. THAT is a sign of a good poem, that it leaves as much to the reader to interpret as it may to the writer who penned it. |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 07/23/04 at 09:50 PM Sweetie, your shorties are the besties..hehehe..MUAHS!!! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/24/04 at 08:08 AM dead on... straight and to the point, like an arrow... bravo... blessings... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/18/04 at 12:11 PM I feel like that sometimes. Just can't seem to understand. Like evryone else around me 'gets it' but not me. |
