|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/21/04 at 05:57 AM|
Wonderful poem. That last stanza really got me. Good work, Thomas! I hate good-byes.
|Posted by Emily Sullivan on 07/21/04 at 05:43 PM|
we are waiting!
|Posted by Kara Hayostek on 07/22/04 at 01:48 AM|
I really love this poem, the third stanza especially. The faces around a candlelit table, such a warm and intimate image.
|Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/23/04 at 02:21 AM|
U have really brought it all alive.Not just the scene but the inner layers of it all.This is excellent.
|Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/24/04 at 03:16 AM|
my daughter having loved living by the St. Lawrence for two years, this really moves me. Distance is only a detail when the spirit travels to be close to family. Beautiful.
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/24/04 at 08:22 AM|
a reunion of the spirit, body and soul... excellent, thomas... perfect form and rhyme scheme... touched my heart... blessings...