Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/21/04 at 05:57 AM Wonderful poem. That last stanza really got me. Good work, Thomas! I hate good-byes. |
Posted by Emily Sullivan on 07/21/04 at 05:43 PM we are waiting! |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 07/22/04 at 01:48 AM I really love this poem, the third stanza especially. The faces around a candlelit table, such a warm and intimate image. |
Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/23/04 at 02:21 AM U have really brought it all alive.Not just the scene but the inner layers of it all.This is excellent. |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/24/04 at 03:16 AM my daughter having loved living by the St. Lawrence for two years, this really moves me. Distance is only a detail when the spirit travels to be close to family. Beautiful. |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/24/04 at 08:22 AM a reunion of the spirit, body and soul... excellent, thomas... perfect form and rhyme scheme... touched my heart... blessings... |