Home   Home

Power

by Bruce W Niedt

<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />

 

That night, the restaurant would reverberate

with the voice of a husband, who would berate

his wife mercilessly for what she ate.

 

Afterward, a taxi transported

them home. The next day, she sported

a shiner on her right eye. Her husband Ted

 

would say she ran into a refrigerator

door. She said nothing, this gyrator

around him, serving her terrible tour

 

of marriage; she held to absolute

silence. Its a wonder she doesnt salute

him, their friends confided. But her loot

 

in the candy jar, beneath the nonpareils

that was her ticket. One day shed exit the perils

of this life -  leaving and liberty, capital Ls

 

in her book - and take the electricity

with her. He would be able to go nowhere in the city,

powerless, darkened, tasting the leaves of a bitter tea.

07/18/2004

Author's Note: Another writing exercise from The Practice of Poetry - probably not the final draft. Note how each stanza contains \"nested\" rhymes - i.e., the 2nd and 3rd lines of each stanza are words derived from progressively shortened versions of the longer word....

Posted on 07/18/2004
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 09/06/04 at 10:22 PM

A well-dressed exercise with a message for the closeted couple of backhanded blasphemy. If ever there was a reason for revenge, this may be one of them. Good stuff, Bruce...pe4ce

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.1 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 70 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2026 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)