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Disposable

by Trisha De Gracia

I’m hollow when I’m all alone
-Like this.
When nothing feels whole anymore.
When adolescence isn’t adequate as an excuse.

I’m hollow when nobody’s here
-Really here.
When I can’t hear you breathing.
When I can’t hear myself.


Fill me up
And I just might
Leak out all over the floor.

Shatter me
And I become
Disposable again.

07/17/2004

Posted on 07/17/2004
Copyright © 2024 Trisha De Gracia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/18/04 at 01:54 AM

*hugs.* hm. i love you.

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/18/04 at 01:55 AM

suggestion: take out "all." in the first line. makes it flow a bit better.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/18/04 at 06:34 AM

Fill me up And I just might Leak out all over the floor. ...heartbreaking. keep writing it out, girl. i smiled when i saw the green arrow next to your name. love and hugs to you!

Posted by Christina Bruno on 07/21/04 at 10:49 PM

you captivate feelings perfectly, this is amazing

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