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and what makes me the one to stop her?
by Lauren Pearlshe dribbles blasphemy into the mouthpiece
weighted by the sunlight and stardust
she adds for special effect
lips touching, hands touching, hair touching
parts of your spine i only do in daydreams
she just can't keep her fingers under control tonight
and rumor has it, you've never had much
of a backbone to begin with. 07/09/2004 Author's Note: two-minute quick write.
Posted on 07/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Lauren Pearl
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 08/07/04 at 10:29 PM wow. i love those quick one/two minute scrawls that leave you bleeding on the page with souls howling and the moon layered behind. *tilts her head.* i love this. absolutely love it. you, dear, are a hidden treasure i didn't (until now) know existed. |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 08/13/05 at 07:38 PM That last line just blew me away. Amazing read, and I am jealous that it took you only two minutes to write something as amazing as this! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/29/06 at 11:23 PM Enjoyed this, thanks for the read! |
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