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[Library] Bottom's Up

by Nikki Rice

string
its
by
it
caught
I
and
by
floated
just
happiness
of
balloon
The
own
my
into
rise
I
Up
control
take
to
time
it's
and
dotted
are
"i"s
my
All
lines
crossing
and
walls
Climbing
day
my
is
today
like
feeling
finally
am
I

07/09/2004

Posted on 07/09/2004
Copyright © 2025 Nikki Rice

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 07/13/04 at 04:08 PM

unique form...i like what you've done here

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/13/04 at 09:40 PM

I thought I forgot how to read... then I read the title again. Clever form!

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