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by John Harder

Waking dreams
Faking my fantasy
Shaking with frustration
My facade is sanity

07/09/2004

Posted on 07/09/2004
Copyright © 2025 John Harder

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Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 07/10/04 at 08:43 PM

i like the rhyme, sort of whimsical (which is disturbing) and the last line is fantastic.

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