The mantra of a ghost, whispered in a haiku

by Alastre Zidler

i remain for you
as a vinework shroud drowns these
gardens forgotten


Posted on 07/06/2004
Copyright © 2022 Alastre Zidler

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/07/04 at 04:48 PM

This is subtle, Title speaking for the piece and piece for the title. They compliment each other.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/09/04 at 01:32 PM


Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/27/12 at 06:43 AM

STILL beautiful, and so glad to see this as POTD!! I miss you Alastre!!! Come back to us!!

Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/27/12 at 07:44 PM

Nice to see a haiku on the POTD. Great work!

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