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The mantra of a ghost, whispered in a haiku
by Alastre Zidleri remain for you
as a vinework shroud drowns these
gardens forgotten
07/06/2004 Posted on 07/06/2004
Copyright © 2025 Alastre Zidler
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/07/04 at 04:48 PM This is subtle, Title speaking for the piece and piece for the title. They compliment each other. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/09/04 at 01:32 PM Beautiful. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/27/12 at 06:43 AM STILL beautiful, and so glad to see this as POTD!! I miss you Alastre!!! Come back to us!! |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/27/12 at 07:44 PM Nice to see a haiku on the POTD. Great work! |
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