Tempestuous by Anne Engelen
Votaress
Of stout-heartedness
Lover of
Candour
Afire with unquenchable desire
Name your price!
Irremissible, yet irrisistible tease
Cut me loose 06/22/2004 Posted on 06/22/2004 Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen
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Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/22/04 at 09:17 PM Love the last 2 lines in particular, yet unhappy about the one before! Ah well - maybe its me and my dislike of coloquielisms in what could be timeless verse. |
Posted by Rula Shin on 06/23/04 at 03:45 PM Oooh! On fire!! Damn this is good Anne...the flow, the language...this is volacanic indeed! An explosion of passion and longing on fire and how uncontained it feels when contained by such simple yet expansive imagery...oh I loved this, and of course the colors...beautiful Anne, the queen of acrostics you most certainly are.. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/23/04 at 11:41 PM I do agree with the other comments Anne. Well
done....Charlie |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/24/04 at 01:32 PM Now whats left for me to say? It is 'tempestuous', as the title suggestively suggests.The flow is good and the color adds to the color.Its a nice piece.
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Posted by Kristine Briese on 06/25/04 at 07:31 PM Excellent piece, and beautiful flow of color! |
Posted by Keith D Allison on 06/27/04 at 03:57 PM This is like Belgium lace. |
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