| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/22/04 at 06:54 PM Not bad at all especially for a first go. I live the contrasy=t between the middle and last line. Sends it into 3 dimensions |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/24/04 at 12:59 AM Darn good....Charlie |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/24/04 at 07:25 PM what a happy little ditty :) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/15/07 at 06:47 PM Chipper it is! Chirp... chirp.. (Since I love me some Chipper, the title grabbed my attention of course! ;-) |