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Chipper

by Alison McKenzie

Birds singing loudly
Joyful bubbling rising sun
Cool wet morning grass

06/22/2004

Author's Note: My first attempt at a haiku

Posted on 06/22/2004
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/22/04 at 06:54 PM

Not bad at all especially for a first go. I live the contrasy=t between the middle and last line. Sends it into 3 dimensions

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/24/04 at 12:59 AM

Darn good....Charlie

Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/24/04 at 07:25 PM

what a happy little ditty :)

Posted by A. Paige White on 11/15/07 at 06:47 PM

Chipper it is! Chirp... chirp.. (Since I love me some Chipper, the title grabbed my attention of course! ;-)

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