| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/03/04 at 05:53 AM I love this poem and it evoked two feeling inside of me - sadness and comfort. Two suggestions - add some punctuation - not much - the lack of it can be confusing. Also, make a stanza break at the second "Little lullabies," since if sounds like a slightly different thought than the first half of the poem. Take or leave the suggestions as you will. |
