| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/30/04 at 12:40 PM a pencil atop one's ear produces a picture of a person ever in the creative process.Jadi, the poet. Native indian carpenters does keep a pencil atop their ear.
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| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/31/04 at 05:48 PM Didn't the poet ever look in the mirror? I suppose that's when it was finally found ;-) Funny stuff JD, and as unpoetic as you claim it to be, one line depicting a moment of self discovery...well this is a beautiful reflection on reflection...the humor indicates to me a humble spirit...laughing it off...I like this one hahaha :-) |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 06/01/04 at 12:34 AM oh my dear, you make me laugh... |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 06/01/04 at 04:41 PM What a wonderful metaphor! I think the pencil was on my ear for about 20 years.... d:-) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 06/05/04 at 05:01 PM and what a floodgate such a pencil would invoke *wink* |
