a start of something REWORKED ( and still need suggestions!!) by Kalikala Smith Climbed the highest mountain only to find the valley below looked more divine. Searched the ocean for deeper seas only to find I couldn't wade above my knees. Waited for the right moment and couldn't move farther. I'm stuck in this motion of writing nothing other than... nothing. 05/23/2004 Author's Note: oh this is a pathetic start to a poem. i have no inspiration to write anything anymore. i've been too happy. does that make any sense?? anyway, the poem i want it to be about how people are never satisfied with what they have. they always feel like they want more. Posted on 05/24/2004 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/31/04 at 09:51 PM This is directly put with scenery! I loved it. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)