In a single word you said:
thanks,
that doesnt say so much,
so much as it reveals
so much
more
underneath

I heard a different
you
in that moment
of truth,
sigh and almost give in
to feelings
underneath

~

Where's that little girl?
Where's that dream
that's been deferred?

A ticking time bomb,
waiting to go off
in a white-hot instant

of decision.

~

Questioning is pain,
and,
not knowing is, too...

pain
like a slow bleeding from
underneath.

But what makes it seem
like Christmas morning,
racing downstairs
to see?
And what, little girl,
are those presents
underneath?

05/19/2004

Author's Note: Written to a friend. I guess it's sort of about figuring out what you're passionate about doing -- what makes you excited -- and then going out there and doing it. Trite, and the plotline of countless teen dramadies, but relevant nonetheless. So sue me...

Posted on 05/20/2004
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