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Ocean View (balcony fantasy)
by Quinlan L GibsonOceanside two souls collide as passionate as gripping tides
wash over you and pull in close, listen to the Eastern coast
Letting it consume your mind, in and out along with tide
Set the pace, out open wide, from balconys there may be spies.
Add to the voyeurism and know that theyre all wishing.
Tempt me not, wont take a lot, to make this a success
Touch me here and kiss me there and then lift up my dress.
Gripping hips and open lips breathe salty air and sea.
Your simple breath upon my ear does it easily.
Moonlight beams do sillhouette what is about to happen yet
its just enough for me to catch a glimpse of this beautiful scene
Primal, yet serene, intense love, and all it means.
05/18/2004 Author's Note: Ohhhh Myrtle Beach, I love you.
Posted on 05/19/2004
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/19/04 at 06:35 PM Myrtle Beach is so magical! I've only been their four times, but one of those times was my honeymoon. Great verse with sensual detail and enough left to the imagination to keep one taut with excitement. Great read, as usual. |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 05/21/04 at 06:01 PM Very visual with a great rhythm (no pun intended). |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/22/04 at 05:18 AM Myrtle beach was great, just went a few weeks ago. i love the salty air and sea. would be great to get down to Miami this year. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/20/04 at 11:46 PM this is sweet and rhythmic and not at all durtygirlie!! the whole piece rolls and swells like the ocean itself. dynamite rythm and line. |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 10/10/04 at 07:38 PM Gotta love the ocean :) Very nice poem :) |
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