| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/18/04 at 10:42 PM mutually created, indeed... when one steps outside and peeks within this tiny existence, one can reflect on every speck of sand... the trick is knowing that every speck of sand comes from every other speck of sand... i hope this is a clue we will hear more from the mind that convinced me to reside in this beautiful place... your writing is talent soaring on the wings of a star... blessings... |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/19/04 at 10:11 PM Point of dirt and water. Incredible. That line alone will play in my mind a long time. Welcome back, you jumped in the deep end swimming without missing a single stroke. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/20/04 at 04:47 PM Yes, if I lose my faith he loses his existence. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 05/20/04 at 08:17 PM Yay! I have been looking for new stuff from you. You never disappoint. :) |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 05/20/04 at 10:37 PM Well done Max,a very thought provoking piece here.
That we created to create us......HHHhhhhmmm |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 05/21/04 at 12:13 PM a deep, introverted and philosophical piece of writing Max! Good to see ya back to the keyboards! ;P |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/22/04 at 06:52 PM Paradoxical poetry, Max. Ashes and dust, eggs and chicks, your creation a concundrum of magnatudinous proportion.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 05/26/04 at 07:02 PM "a God/ that we created/ to create us." - possibly the most strikingly true line I've read in a LONG TIME. The philosophy and lyricism in this poem merge quite nicely into a piece that belongs on my favorites list. Well-done. |
