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Gardening without a green thumb

by Traci Mabats

I vainly planted
seeds of dreams
and aspirations
And then watched
helplessly
as weeds of truth
choked them out

05/18/2004

Posted on 05/18/2004
Copyright © 2024 Traci Mabats

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/19/04 at 06:36 PM

There is so much truth in these words that it almost hurts to read them. Excellent obsevation painted most artistically with words.

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/22/04 at 05:15 AM

Cool poem, too bad there isn't a "reality be gone" to get rid of those weeds. uggh

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