Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/14/04 at 12:58 PM this is so dark and brooding... it feels as if i'm in a dream-state, reading the words... what it would feel like to be isolated, secluded... this is vivid and rich... a very melancholy touch to it also... i am loving the rhyme scheme being just slightly off, but close enough to rhyme... it gives flavor... this is a gem... blessings... |