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Seclusion

by Thomas K. Hunt

A black unbearable distance
lays stretched by specific miles
It creates a vast void of color
Forms a hole from deep inside

Tangible fleeting moments
disappear like seasonal birds
Out weighed in the balance
between touch and the spoken word

Hearing only voices
Vibrations across the line
Photographs in envelopes
documenting passing time

Time stolen faces
Missing knowing eyes
Longing for that comfort
of living without lies

Now gray days, blackened nights
Thoughts that cross a mind
Fill this lone existence
Occupy this desperate time

05/14/2004

Posted on 05/14/2004
Copyright © 2024 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/14/04 at 12:58 PM

this is so dark and brooding... it feels as if i'm in a dream-state, reading the words... what it would feel like to be isolated, secluded... this is vivid and rich... a very melancholy touch to it also... i am loving the rhyme scheme being just slightly off, but close enough to rhyme... it gives flavor... this is a gem... blessings...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/16/04 at 06:49 AM

Oh how I remember that feeling so well. So very vivid described. Well done :)

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