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I opened myself
by Traci MabatsI opened myself
to you
I let the dam break
against your palm
I laid down at your feet
submissive
and vulnerable
my throat
ready at your finger tips
But you didn't move
you hardly
blinked an eye
I gave to you
what I had carried
in my heart for so long
And you failed to realize
its significance
So tell me, dear sir
where do I go from here
now with my heart so
heavy in my hands 05/13/2004 Posted on 05/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 Traci Mabats
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/14/04 at 02:01 AM This is one of those, I came, I saw, I conquered poems with a few issues still unresolved. It certainly has a good feel to it and I love the last line, yet it seems to be begging for closure or perhaps a sequel to draw it all together.
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