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Unforecasted

by Christel Crews

The thunder looms
in the overcast skies
as rain begins to gently fall

A break in the clouds
electricity connects heaven to earth
on the horizon, a storm brews

The rain sings on the rooftop
and creates miniature rivers
along the pavement

Alone I sit, at the window
tracing drops down the pane
thinking of you and what we lost

Rising to leave, pass the umbrella
I will not need it today
no shoes, I step out to join the rain

Lifting my face I feel
moisture run down my cheek
today nature bears my pain

05/09/2004

Author's Note: there was an unexpected rain the other day and it seemed to put me in a pensive mood... and this is what came out

Posted on 05/11/2004
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/12/04 at 09:42 PM

very simple, yet the images are quite nicely expressed and powerful...i liked it...

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/20/06 at 05:48 AM

Christel, you have expressed so well what I also have written my poems. It appears that rain and tears mix well, especially when sad memories are involved.
~Chelle~

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