Woden Stares (Sirius rises) by Richard PaezOrion ascends Breaking the horizon As the tide breaks the shore.
Prepare you now For the oncoming And the onslaught—
Know you now That this is the year Of the belt and sword.
Sirius rises Parting the waves As the blade parts the brow.
Prepare you now Mark your doors With sheep’s blood—
Know you now That this is the year Of the aster-fall.
Prepare you now ‘Fore the blade parts your brow—
Know you now As Woden stares His one-eye stare In a blink The world is swallowed.
{the child I was and will be fears to close his eyes least the world that we have known disappears}
Know you now As Woden glares His one-eye glare With a tear The world is flooded
{the child I was and will be hides to lose the sound till the crumbling of the world subsides}
Orion ascends. The honor of the past Now the bloodshed on the ‘morrow.
The thunder-voices of the gods Now whispers on the television.
Sirius rises. The glory of the past Now the tear-shed on the ‘morrow.
The lighting bolts of the gods Now the fading flicker Behind drawn curtains And locked doors.
Know you now— Still Woden stares His one-eye stare.
In a blink The world is swallowed. 05/11/2004 Author's Note: This is so rough that I shouldn’t even be posting it. I would appreciate any commentary or insight. My original idea was for a much longer poem, focusing more on the childhood issue than on the political one. I grew up in the early eighties—after sesame street the nightly news came on, where all they seemed to talk about was the impending nuclear apocalypse. I wanted the poem to focus on that, the fear of death and radiation, the sweats. The mythological images were to reinforce the childhood imagery and imagination, the hopelessness of a child alone in his room at night knowing that the possibility of waking up tomorrow was entirely in the hands of the gods. As it stands the poem is too abstract, needs more detail. And the rhythm is way off.
Posted on 05/11/2004 Copyright © 2025 Richard Paez
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Posted by Traci Mabats on 05/11/04 at 07:09 PM I like it the way it is. I like the idea of the world being flooded by a single tear. |
Posted by JD Clay on 05/15/04 at 05:33 PM Cycloptic poetry, malachi. I don't know whether you meant 'the lightening blots of the gods' but it strikes like a bolt. Odin would be proud, as am I. Your astronomical piece is a dynamic presentation of complexities beyond this realm, yet so evident to sailors, stargazers, purveyors of truth, and children alike. Reminds me of the concept that the Indigo Child cannot and will not be fooled, but my intervention would be detrimental to your inner-connectedness to this/your process. I anxiously await the final draft.
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