prostitution limerick. by Kalikala Smith her face was covered in ash and spittle she had only a cast of her bones to whittle the knock on the door was looking for more and she could only give a little. 05/08/2004 Author's Note: okay okay, so limericks to me have always been happy. this is my first try at one and i decided to take a different twist. tell me if i'm doing this all wrong or what guys, cuz it seems... well, weird. yay. Posted on 05/08/2004 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Christel Crews on 05/09/04 at 06:51 PM i would add "and she could only give BUT a little" to make the last line flow as the first two. i love limericks! i think they are fun to write and whatnot. this is a great first attempt at them :) Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/10/04 at 04:04 PM Well, its a sad poem rather than a limerick. Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/12/04 at 09:41 PM not a bad start...but the flow is not quite right for a limerick...maybe lengthen the last line..however, i love the idea of the poem... Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)