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Lost

by Brian Francis



When the world through a haze of pain is seen
And one’s heart drags slow and long
When images thought to always be true
Through the haze are revealed to be false
The ripping away of the comforts of life
Those promises revered by the soul
An emptiness pervades and engulfs all belief
You can never again be complete or content
consumed by the fire of betrayals and lies
Faith floats away as the smoke and is gone

05/07/2004

Posted on 05/07/2004
Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 05/22/04 at 05:45 PM

Faith floats away as the smoke and is gone....Wonderful imagery...Well done

Posted by P.T. Brooks on 12/16/06 at 04:46 PM

as thomas said the last line gets my vote for kick ass but the whole poem was strog, great piece -pt

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