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Ice Hockey

by Ashley Beaudoin

It's a rush to stop the puck from getting in the net
Cheers from the crowd and team mates on the bench
Everything counts in this game

How you skate or pass the puck
Overwhelming when you win for the first game of the season
Coach telling you, great game!
Knowing he really means it
Even with all the hitting and board checking
You can't help but love the sport

05/06/2004

Author's Note: First attempt at Acrostic style poetry. And yes I play goalie!

Posted on 05/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Ashley Beaudoin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 05/09/04 at 06:36 PM

wow- you play goalie? that's awesome!!!! i love this sport and this is a great try at acrostics!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/10/04 at 03:07 AM

Well, you attained your goal ( despite being a goalie)in your very first attemt in this restricted form. You presented the game so well.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/16/04 at 05:17 PM

excellent acrostic!

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