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so fake; so "saved"

by Nanette Bellman

your on again, off again friend.

He becons @ your call

you know this.

 

i, sick.

because you wear your Jesus shirt

only now, only when

  the almight Pastor

is about to set foot

in OUR house.

 

you break out your Bible

quickly study for some insight

this all maybe yet to come

 

she knocks on the door

and you wipe the dust from your sleeve

 

i'll just go back in your closet.

01/08/2004

Author's Note: i do NOT mean to offend anyone by this. this is about my mom. she gets like this when her pastor comes over to visit once a month. it really disgusts me.

Posted on 05/02/2004
Copyright © 2025 Nanette Bellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Barbara Griffith on 05/02/04 at 09:52 PM

I really like this! Except the "@" symbol seems to really make the whole poem.... I'm not sure, kind of immature, I guess. I think it would be more powerful with the actual word.

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