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Shiny Happy People (cinquain)

by Michelle Calhoun

Sunshine
Warm, radiant
Shining brightly on me
Please, let there be no rain today
Shine on!

04/23/2004

Posted on 04/30/2004
Copyright © 2024 Michelle Calhoun

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/30/04 at 12:06 PM

Hope your wish was (is) granted. :) intertesting formatt.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/30/04 at 06:39 PM

Good poem Mich: I wish we could loan you some of our sunshine we are having record heat...Charlie

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/01/04 at 02:52 AM

yes, let there be no rain today. Let the sun shine. Its a beautiful minimal.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 08/12/04 at 03:18 AM

I love this..it is like a heart wish... one I hope is granted. Yet I would also wish you enough rain to appreciate the sun *hugs*....

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