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0429

by Jon-Jacob F Deal

The greatest irony is
I think
Not that I can't touch you
But that
You wouldn't let me
Even
If
I
Could

(Today years past was skin to skin but now it's just ATM PIN)

04/29/2004

Author's Note: Happy Unniversary.

Posted on 04/29/2004
Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/29/04 at 04:25 PM

very sad... insightful of a cold person... great form... blessings...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/30/04 at 05:23 AM

ouch...the sarcasm in this one bites. well written!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/30/04 at 02:26 PM

Irony? Yes.

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