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Time (Haiku form)

by Quinlan L Gibson

Neglecting my words.
Replaced them with Pilates.
My ass is higher.

04/28/2004

Author's Note: this is a trickle of the zero inspiration I've had in the last month...I'm just blank.

Posted on 04/28/2004
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 04/28/04 at 11:20 PM

Well that's a good time filler if I ever heard one! hahahah better than beer and cigarettes...well, in the long run anyway ;-)

Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/29/04 at 05:28 AM

This made me smile!!! Good to see the Pilates still have effect! The words will come too, I'll bet your trip's going to help big time!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/29/04 at 05:12 PM

this is awesome... ahahaha... hey, something has to be said for a tight, er, bum... and when you get back to your muse, it's good to be in shape for the loooooooooong time you sit around writing, if you're anything like me (although, i kind of agree with T.A.!!!)... thanks for the smile... blessings...

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/29/04 at 05:16 PM

i know how you feel dear...but this is a great a haiku...i love it..

Posted by Traci Mabats on 04/30/04 at 08:12 PM

I was wondering what happened. Lol. You still got it girl. And a higher ass as well, bonus.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/01/04 at 02:35 AM

This sounds like a transistional period.

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