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by JD Clay

 

 

Dangling his participle, jadi hangs on every word.

 

 

 

 

09/05/2004

Author's Note: No need to wrack your brain; jadi does not consider this poetry and all comments go unsolicited.

Posted on 04/25/2004
Copyright © 2025 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/25/04 at 01:22 PM

Word to word like pole to pole like moment to moment like whatis, whatever.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/25/04 at 05:54 PM

like a fly to sticky paper... yes... this is great reflective... i need to remember this... blessings...

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/25/04 at 09:57 PM

Quite a cumbersome task indeed...it's lucky that you don't suffer speech impedimentia ;P

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/26/04 at 12:04 PM

LOL! Very clever! I'd almost forgotten about "dangling participles" . You dangle yours well! ;)

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