| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/23/04 at 03:22 AM Well done Mich....Charlie |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/23/04 at 03:27 AM Oh, I do like this...I am not schooled in poetry foams so I really can't speak to that...but in the few well chosen words you do speak of Eternal Life! I especially like "He stretched his arms and died for us." because it shows that He went willingly to His death for us. |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/23/04 at 03:29 AM opps...or poetry forms either...tee hee |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/26/04 at 07:02 PM Wow, intense flashbacks from "The Passion of the Christ" - I like how the cinquain (a form that I too am not familiar with) is almost in a cross shape itself...a simple and honest poem of heartfelt faith. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/08/04 at 04:15 AM He is alive in his DEATH. Isn't He? Sweet little piece. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/09/05 at 11:13 AM How did I miss this. Wonderfully inspirational. |
