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A kiss behind (suggestiveish)
by Amy NiggelMore experience
beneath your belt.
Your hand
beneath my shirt.
I wish I'd known
what casual meant
before we'd started.
I thought "I love you"
meant something more than
"I want to take you"
You were oh so good
at everything.
But I just couldn't keep up,
you had
more experience
beneath your belt,
and your hand
beneath my skirt
and I always was
a kiss behind. 04/22/2004 Author's Note: came up with the title first then tried to write a poem to fit it, it came out ok I guess, I'm not good at writing explicit stuff I suppose.
Posted on 04/22/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amy Niggel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 08/31/04 at 06:03 PM you're very good at writing explicitly...don't be fooled |
| Posted by Phil Walling on 01/28/05 at 01:45 PM well done |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/25/05 at 09:59 PM I thought "I love you"
meant something more than
"I want to take you"
...
how sad how true that often is... very good read:) |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 06/05/11 at 03:25 AM This poem says so, so much and really hits the message home; I think it's a fine write and sadly, often so true to boot. |
| Posted by Gilly Wigley on 08/14/13 at 04:06 AM Love this! |
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