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Relit Love
by Deanna M Gritsonis
Your arms around my curves
Exploring the art that is me
So long I have forgotten your touch
My head laying upon your stomach
Breathing in that longing smell of you and your body
Falling into you
Rediscovering what I loved and had forgotten
The new marks of manhood, the soft eyes, the deep voice
In my dreaming state your kiss relit the fire
Feeling your wanting press
Hoping not to stop
Hoping to stay dazed
Crying love
04/20/2004 Author's Note: After listening to two ladies conversation at work.
Posted on 04/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Deanna M Gritsonis
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/23/04 at 03:34 PM Yes, the external impression is capable of causing internal 'effect'. I would prefer 'craving for love' instead of crying love in the last line. |
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