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A note to myself
by Oliver DrewmanHello there you
Do not forget
There are other
Loving people yet
Good day there me
Remember every day
To smile more
You only have today
Greetings myself
You are not alone
In feeling cold and hard
Like an ancient tome
Salutations I
Love a little more
Than you do today
There are good things in store
Hi there buddy
Stand up for yourself
Let not others rule you
Their petty opinions shelf
Good day my friend
I wish you well
Read this often
Remember how good you spell 04/19/2004 Author's Note: silly ending. needs work. If you could write a note to yourself what would you say? (inspired by the fact you can't send an instant message to yourself on pathetic)
Posted on 04/19/2004
Copyright © 2024 Oliver Drewman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/20/04 at 04:46 AM Nice poem, but then again, we all need some self-talk. Suggestions for the ending: "on bad do not dwell," "walk, do not crawl (off or slant)," something like that. End with a surprise line. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 04/21/04 at 05:03 AM Eyes and poetry are the windows to an individual's soul. I thoroughly enjoyed viewing your heart and soul in this piece. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/21/04 at 04:46 PM 'Hello there you',This is a beautiful and positive approach, so full of life.'Remember every day
To smile more
You only have today' What can be more positive?
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| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 04/23/04 at 10:49 PM very creative from your inspiration...I like it a lot |
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