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Poetic Pathology

by Jon-Jacob F Deal

You cold clinician
Dissecting others' babies
And inviting same

04/12/2004

Author's Note: Sometimes the technical way people comment on each other on this site makes my skin crawl.

Posted on 04/12/2004
Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/12/04 at 03:09 PM

wow...point well taken!

Posted by Deborah S Regan on 04/16/04 at 01:55 AM

very good, and often true!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/16/04 at 02:02 AM

uniquely put...must think about that one...

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 06/09/04 at 09:05 PM

I definately agree with you, i think its really odd. if your friend shows you her drawing do u whip out a pencil and start erasing, shading, and changing things?

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