| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/14/04 at 12:28 AM Ooh very intense indeed! First thing I saw was, I feel your hands around my neckyour eyes filled with hate for meyoull write your confession with my blood ah yes very clever and a wonderful opposition to the seeming love content of the poem that speaks of soft as [your] lipsheart beatingthankful to be [with] you. I really like the way you reveal the conflict in the relationship. Hidden in words, as most likely, the real conflict isand though you write words of tenderness in this loveletter, there on your own tongue is the fear and trepidation spelled out in no uncertain terms.great piece! |
