10. a moment inside a wildfire by Jason Wardellblue flames dry my eyes
yet i can't hold back my tears:
i've choked on your scent 04/05/2004 Author's Note: i thought this was 10-worthy, even though i wrote it before 09.
Posted on 04/05/2004 Copyright © 2024 Jason Wardell
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Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/05/04 at 01:22 PM I like how it sounds like a love poem... but then the title says its inside of a wildfire |
Posted by Rula Shin on 04/05/04 at 11:57 PM You choked before you burned! Very unique vision of "a moment inside a wildfire" - Love, either way you're done for! hahahaha Lovely read :-) |
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