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10. a moment inside a wildfire

by Jason Wardell

blue flames dry my eyes
yet i can't hold back my tears:
i've choked on your scent

04/05/2004

Author's Note: i thought this was 10-worthy, even though i wrote it before 09.

Posted on 04/05/2004
Copyright © 2024 Jason Wardell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/05/04 at 01:22 PM

I like how it sounds like a love poem... but then the title says its inside of a wildfire

Posted by Rula Shin on 04/05/04 at 11:57 PM

You choked before you burned! Very unique vision of "a moment inside a wildfire" - Love, either way you're done for! hahahaha Lovely read :-)

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