{ pathetic.org }
 

I am Aphroditie

by Traci Mabats

I am Aphroditie
and despite my many flaws
I am beautiful and lovely
and you sir,
are a fool
not to see this

04/03/2004

Posted on 04/03/2004
Copyright © 2025 Traci Mabats

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/04/04 at 07:01 AM

He is no doubt.A fool, if he cannot see the BEAUTY. And can SENSE the invitation to be and become one with the BEAUTY.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 04/04/04 at 04:52 PM

he must be the wrong beholder. Strong and self-assured message. well done. You go girl,

Posted by Rula Shin on 04/08/04 at 09:07 PM

Yes only a fool can miss the BEAUTY of tender hearted person full of receptive love to give...lovely poem Sharona...very sure and confident and stated with a charming simplicity. :-)

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/15/06 at 06:14 PM

A brilliant little write lol. And a situation to be a fly on the wall for :)

Posted by Laurie Blum on 03/25/11 at 04:18 PM

Love it! Absolutely LOVE it! Congrats on POTD Traci.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 1 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)