| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/06/04 at 03:25 PM Welcome to Pathetic! Lovely poem :-) |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/29/04 at 05:13 PM This was one of the most beautiful poems! And of course, being a member of the Word family, the affinity goes without saying. Still, the perspective was so fresh, I thank you for bringing it. It was like having coffee with a distant cousin who talked about DNA I had been previously unaware of and now suddently realizing where it comes from. Being one with words, yes. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/29/04 at 05:14 PM ooooh, sorry for not catching the typos...:-( |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/29/04 at 09:33 PM incredible poem... your life is your art, and vice-versa... this resonated so well! Congrats, to, on being POTteD at Pathetic! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/29/04 at 09:54 PM I enjoyed this poem so much. It's a fresh look at language and the image creation for communication. Congratulations on being POTD! |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 09/29/04 at 10:43 PM Consumed by your own words! The visual and semantic effects give this a life of its own. An infectious first post with a well-received delivery. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/12/11 at 02:24 PM Great insight into the "word". Original and captivating! |
